Can someone please check this and if their any errors I could correct?

Answer:

put a comma after but and 2042. Instead of the would founded use found. "I work at a daycare where I watch kids and entertain them or play with them" take out "or play with them" your just repeating yourself in that sentence. instead of "their name is Kate" put "her" because Kate is one person she isn't plural. put a comma after tuna. "sometimes me and the kids would play fun games like for an example heads up seven up" put a semicolon after games, take out "like for an example" and put "we woul play heads up seven up". "Every year at the daycare" put a comma after daycare.

I corrected half the page for you, I don't have time to look at the rest hope this helps

A letter to your friend describing how you will go for shopping

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What attractive power dose the sea have on the seafarer

how many people at Malaysia​

What information can be revealed through characterization

I don’t know what ________ to him now.

Which sentence contains an action verb?


A.
Sun Valley in Idaho is very popular with winter sports fans.

B.
Skiers will also find great slopes in Colorado and Utah.

C.
neither

Read the following poem and answer the question that follows.

"O Captain! my Captain!" by Walt Whitman

O Captain! my Captain! our fearful trip is done;
The ship has weather'd every rack, the prize we sought is won;
The port is near, the bells I hear, the people all exulting,
While follow eyes the steady keel, the vessel grim and daring:
But O heart! heart! heart!
O the bleeding drops of red,
Where on the deck my Captain lies,
Fallen cold and dead.

O Captain! my Captain! rise up and hear the bells;
Rise up—for you the flag is flung—for you the bugle trills;
For you bouquets and ribbon'd wreaths—for you the shores a—crowding;
For you they call, the swaying mass, their eager faces turning;
Here Captain! dear father!
This arm beneath your head;
It is some dream that on the deck,
You've fallen cold and dead.

My Captain does not answer, his lips are pale and still;
My father does not feel my arm, he has no pulse nor will;
The ship is anchor'd safe and sound, its voyage closed and done;
From fearful trip, the victor ship, comes in with object won;
Exult, O shores, and ring, O bells!
But I, with mournful tread,
Walk the deck my Captain lies,
Fallen cold and dead.

What connotation does the poet use for the words in bold?

Celebration
Fury
Romance
Misery

during the intermission our band played several songs active or passive?

HISTORY Of MODERM Olympic Game

When is it appropriate to use emotions to try to persuade people

13. Select the sentence that does not contain an error. (10 points)
Working with these people were a great experience.
Working with this person were a great experience.
Working with these person was a great experience.
Working with these people was a great experience.

What's the resolution of the murders in the rue morgue?

Which quotation supports the inference that the goal of the Cybathlon empowers pilots—win or
lose?

What have you learned on how to connect with someone? Give examples.

please help reflect on what analysis means to you in 5 sentences​

will give brainliest

adjectives in Over seven million pounds of thrust pushed the anxious men upward

lan is proud of himself for finally solving the puzzle he has been working on all month. How does this accomplishment BEST fit in Maslow's
hierarchy of needs?

A. esteem
B.love
C.psychological
D.safety

What are the similarities of prescriptivism and descriptivism?

Sentence transformation (adjectives and adverbs)
1. My brother is a skillful swimmer.
My brother can ………………………………………………………
2. Her friends are very slow typists.
Her friends ………………………………………
3. Her husband drives safely.
Her husband is ………………………………………
4. They gave a very good performance.
They ………………………………………
5. That boy is a careless driver. That boy

why do laymen spend money ?​

People have learned to ski, kayak, and run marathons with their_____.
a.virtually
b.prosthetic limbs
c. tragic
d.rеnеw
e.severely ​

Question 3 Multiple Choice Worth 10 points)
(LC)
What is the main purpose of informational writing?
To compare and contrast
To present popular views on a topic
To express opinions without evidence
To inform readers about a topic using facts and details

This is part of a letter you receive from an Australian friend. I start at my new school after the holidays. I don't know anyone there. Do you think I'll get on with everyone? How can I make new friends? Now write a letter to your friend giving some advice. (100 words)

Please help me...​

Choose the word that BEST completes the sentence: An antecedent is the word or phase that a (n) _____ stands for. A. Adjective. B. Noun. C. Pronoun. D. Verb.

write a letter to your younger brother giving at least three reasons why you like your friend​

describe how social and environmental responsibility could help fight social challenges ​

Frrrrrrree points


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What part of the Plot sets up
the climax of the story?
A. Exposition
B. Rising Action
C. Climax

Many Shakespeare plays deal with the idea of fate or free will?

"which of these is yours?"
She asked me...